Cover the Canvas
By
Steven
Pressfield
Is the first draft the hardest? Is it different from a third draft, or a
twelfth? Does a first draft possess unique challenges that we have to
attack in a one-of-a-kind way?
Yes, yes and yes.
First drafts are killers
A first draft is different from (and more difficult than) all subsequent
drafts because in a first draft we're filling the blank page. And we
know what that means: Resistance.
Here's my mantra for first drafts. Cover the canvas.
What that means is get something done from A to Z, no matter how
imperfect. A first draft doesn't have to be great; it doesn't have to be
pretty. It can have gaping holes; it can leave every "t" uncrossed and
every "i" undotted. Momentum is everything in a first draft. Get it
done. Cover the canvas.
Resistance and first drafts
Why is this so important? Because in the first draft, Resistance is at
its most powerful. The blank page, day after day... Resistance has ten
thousand chances to come up with reasons for us to quit. The work is too
hard, it's too painful; a jillion other people are doing the same thing
better; we're too old, too young. We're not worthy!
If we dawdle on our first draft, even good news can destroy us. A raise,
a new baby, a winning lottery ticket. Aw shit, there goes our symphony.
Cover the canvas. If our new piece is "The Last Supper," sketch in the
apostles, lay in Jesus, get the table down. Don't sweat the details. It
doesn't matter if Matthew's hair isn't right, or Peter's left hand has
four fingers. We'll fix that later. Get the picture down. Cover the
canvas.
Some smart son of a bitch once said, "There's no such thing as writing,
only re-writing." He was wrong. The first draft is writing. Pure
blue-sky, blank-sheet writing. But he was right too. Because after Draft
#1, it's all rewriting.
Our priority in the first draft is to beat Resistance. Quality is
secondary. Brilliance can come later. Get something down, however
crappy, that looks roughly like a book, a doctoral dissertation, a new
business proposal. Once we've got that, we're over the hump.
Advancing on Baghdad
Gen. James Mattis commanded the 1st Marine Division in Operation Iraqi
Freedom. His mission was to capture Baghdad and remove Saddam Hussein
from power. His plan was exactly like ours for writing a first draft.
(This was the same scheme, by the way, employed by Gen. Schwarzkopf in
Desert Storm, Erwin Rommel in the blitzkrieg conquest of France, and
Caesar and Alexander in every battle they ever fought.)
Gen. Mattis made known his "commander's intent." Here's what he told his
Marines: speed is everything, keep advancing no matter what; if we hit
resistance, bypass it; keep rolling north, stop for nothing.
When Mattis and his Marines were trying to do was to demoralize the
enemy and weaken his will to resist. Mattis wanted to sow panic among
the foe by moving his attacking forces so fast that the enemy would
believe that nothing could stop them. It worked. Iraqi soldiers
defending Al Kut and An Nasiriyah went into battle wearing civilian
clothes under their uniforms, so they could bolt at the first chance and
melt back into the populace.
When our "commander's intent" is Cover The Canvas, we've got a powerful
directive ordering our priorities. Get to the finish line. Don't stop.
Bypass problem spots. Keep advancing.
Why Cover the Canvas works
The genius of this conception is twofold. First, we discover that the
strongpoints we've bypassed often melt away by themselves. Second, once
we've reached our objective, however shakily, the enemy frequently gives
up. He can't believe we're on his doorstep. He waves the white flag.
Our enemy as artists is Resistance. If we make the mistake in our first
draft of playing perfectionist, if we agonize over syntax and take a
week to finish Chapter One, by the time we've reached Chapter Four,
we'll have hit the wall. Resistance will beat us.
But if we can stay nimble and keep advancing, slapping paint on the
canvas and words on the page till we've got something that works from
east to west and north to south, however imperfectly, then we're like
Mattis' Marines on the threshold of Baghdad. True, we've got plenty more
fighting to do, but at least we're here. We've got something we can work
with.
Cover the canvas.
About the Author: Steven Pressfield is an historian, and the author of The War of Art, The
Legend of Bagger Vance (made into the movie starring Will Smith and Matt
Damon), and the historical novels Gates of Fire, Tides of War, Virtues
of War, The Afghan Campaign, and Killing Rommel.
His books are included in the curriculum at West Point and the Naval
Academy, and are on the Commandant's Reading List for the Marine Corps.
His writing also appears on his blog (http://www.stevenpressfield.com),
which features his weekly "Writing Wednesdays" column, and the series
"The Creative Process" and "Agora."
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